Feedback 1: A Portrait of Ari Schwartz
Changing focus for this one- instead of asking the AI coach to reverse-engineer someone else’s photo, I’m asking it for feedback on one that I took. This is from a shoot I did with my friend Ari a couple years ago when I was still somewhat new at photography.
Photographer: Me, John Fawkes
Model: Ari Schwartz
I swear I published this but it was so long ago I can’t find the post now.
Composition and Framing
Composition:
The model is well-placed in the frame, with the rule of thirds applied effectively. However, the top of the image feels a bit cluttered with the tree branches and the palm trees.
The background is interesting, but it might be slightly distracting due to the numerous elements.
Framing:
The model's positioning is good, but there's a lot of space above his head. Cropping some of the sky and top of the image might focus more attention on the model.
Including more of the lower part of the model's body would provide better balance and grounding to the composition.
Lighting
Natural Light:
The lighting seems diffused, which is generally flattering. However, the model's face could use more light to add depth and highlight facial features.
Consider using a reflector or additional light source to brighten the model’s face and create more contrast.
Background and Shadows:
The background is a bit flat in terms of lighting. Some more contrast or selective lighting on the background elements could add depth.
Camera Settings
Depth of Field:
The depth of field is good, separating the model from the background. However, the background could be slightly more blurred to reduce distractions and focus more on the model.
A wider aperture (lower f-stop) could achieve this effect.
Exposure:
The exposure is well-balanced, but the image could benefit from a slight increase in brightness or contrast, particularly on the model’s face.
Model Direction
Pose:
The model's pose is strong and confident, which works well. However, a slight adjustment to the angle of his face towards the camera could create a stronger connection with the viewer.
Relaxing the model’s left hand or changing its position could make the pose look more natural.
Expression:
The model’s expression is good, conveying confidence and thoughtfulness. Encourage the model to vary expressions slightly for a series of shots to capture a range of emotions.
Editing
Color Grading:
The colors are natural and pleasing, but a subtle enhancement of the color contrast could make the image pop more.
Slightly increasing the saturation and vibrance can add warmth and depth to the photo.
Sharpening and Clarity:
Enhance the sharpness and clarity around the model’s face and clothing to draw more attention to these details.
Use selective sharpening to keep the background softer and less distracting.
Cropping and Straightening:
Straighten the image if there is any slight tilt.
Crop the image to remove some of the top space and possibly a bit from the sides to focus more on the model.
Overall Grade: B+
Suggestions for Improvement
Lighting:
Introduce a reflector or external light source to brighten the model’s face and create depth.
Background Management:
Blur the background more using a wider aperture to reduce distractions.
Choose a simpler background or adjust the composition to minimize clutter.
Posing and Expression:
Slightly adjust the model’s pose and facial angle for more engagement.
Ensure hands and arms look relaxed and natural.
Posing instructions for a slightly improved version of this pose:
To direct the model into an improved version of the pose shown in the photo, follow these detailed steps:
Initial Setup:
Position the model in front of the canal with the bridge and boats in the background to maintain the picturesque setting.
Ensure the background is composed in a way that minimizes distractions. Consider positioning the model slightly to the side to use the rule of thirds, creating a more dynamic composition.
Positioning the Model:
Ask the model to stand with his body slightly turned to one side, about 45 degrees to the camera. This creates a more engaging and flattering angle.
Leg Position:
Direct the model to place his weight on his back leg (the one furthest from the camera) for a relaxed stance.
The front leg (closest to the camera) should be slightly bent, with the foot pointed slightly outward. This creates a natural and confident posture.
Torso and Shoulder Position:
Instruct the model to stand upright with a straight back and relaxed shoulders.
His torso should be angled slightly towards the camera, but not directly facing it, to add depth and dimension to the pose.
Arm and Hand Position:
Guide the model to bring one hand up towards his collar or tie, as if adjusting it. This adds a touch of action and sophistication to the pose.
The other arm can rest naturally at his side, with the hand relaxed or in a pocket for a more casual look.
Head and Facial Direction:
Direct the model to turn his head slightly towards the camera with his chin slightly lifted to elongate the neck.
Encourage a confident and relaxed facial expression. His gaze can be directed towards the camera or slightly away for a more contemplative look.
Final Adjustments and Refinements:
Check the overall posture and make small adjustments to ensure everything looks natural and comfortable.
Ensure his shoulders are relaxed and not hunched.
Adjust any stray hair or clothing to ensure the shot is clean and polished.
Posing Script
“Stand facing slightly to the right, with your body at a 45-degree angle to the camera.”
“Place your weight on your back leg and bend your front leg slightly, pointing your foot outward.”
“Stand up straight with your shoulders relaxed.”
“Raise your right hand towards your collar or tie as if adjusting it.”
“Let your left arm hang naturally by your side or place your hand in your pocket.”
“Turn your head slightly towards the camera and lift your chin a bit.”
“Give me a confident, relaxed expression. Look directly at the camera or slightly away.”
Visual and Verbal Guidance
Use your own body to demonstrate the pose if necessary. Sometimes seeing the pose can help the model understand it better.
Continuously communicate with the model, offering encouragement and feedback to make him feel comfortable and confident.
Final Tips
Be patient and give the model time to get into the pose.
Adjust the lighting and camera angle as needed to ensure the pose is captured perfectly.
Take multiple shots from slightly different angles to find the best composition and expression.
